DeviantART is counting down to its 100 millionth deviation! Join in on the fun and take a look back at some of the most noteworthy deviations we've seen along the way. The deviant who uploads the 100 millionth deviation could win a special prize, too. Hurry, we're going to hit the 100 million mark soon!















Comments
--
Stop that, or I shall be forced to foreshorten you.
--
I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.
----------
We are the sanninja!
I has a photography account ---> [link]
--
Stop that, or I shall be forced to foreshorten you.
First off- I love the simple approach, as in you haven't bogged this down with unnecessary shading or details. But you might want to clean up the smudges to really make it look nice and clean. Scanners are super unforgiving about that kind of thing.
Face-You nailed the ear location, which is very good. The neck is also the right thickness. However, the eyes are too high up and far apart. When looking at a face full on, the eyes are exactly one eye-width apart. (Maybe make them a little bigger too.) They are also exactly half way from the top of the skull to the jaw. I'd also make the nose a bit longer. The mouth is too small, as well, typically I THINK it goes from between the inside corners of the two eyes. But make it a bit bigger in general. Also round out those corners in the skull.
Composition- I love it. The negative space is very successful the curve in the neck is nice, and I love how androgynous you've made the figure. Realism is HARD, but it comes with practice. Fortunately it seems like the only issues you are having are very technical, which is all practice. Good job!
Sorry if this is super long.
Thank-you
--
I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.
----------
We are the sanninja!
I has a photography account ---> [link]
No problem!
--
I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.
----------
We are the sanninja!
I has a photography account ---> [link]
Previous PageNext Page