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Words will not come:
They cruelly stand by the doorway to my brain—
Mocking me,
Watching as I try to put my feelings to paper.

They laugh as I fumble with them,
Trying to arrange them into something clear,
Readable—
Scribbling themselves all over my page, just to be tossed aside.

They enter in a jumbled swarm,
Find-a-word style.
Dancing as I pick my way through the crowded letters,
Just to find that one perfect word.
And then… it escapes.

And just as I give up… I see it:
My shining star, my glimmering jewel.
My three perfect words, simple and true.
I love you.
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Dedicated to all poets who try so hard to express the simplest of emotions.

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:iconeliteshinobi3:
it's really good. i like the way some of the lines have been shortened to break the rhythm.

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If all my friends were to jump off a bridge, I wouldn't jump with them. I would be at the bottom to catch them
~Anon

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We are the sanninja!
I am the lite ninja *chocolate milk*
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Thank-you :aww:

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I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.

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We are the sanninja!
I am the manga ninja! *chucks books at you*

I has a photography account ---> [link]
:iconmimi555123:
it's extremely good. I like it.

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"OMG! Is that what I think it is....."
"Big Deal, it's just a super-high-tech-futuristic hover-board. Just wait a couple thousand years, and we'll have virtual reality"
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Thank-you :)

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I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.

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We are the sanninja!
I am the manga ninja! *chucks books at you*

I has a photography account ---> [link]
:icon0utdacious:
Lmaoo =) I know that feeling all to well.
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Yeah. Annoying, isn't it?

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I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.

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We are the sanninja!
I am the manga ninja! *chucks books at you*

I has a photography account ---> [link]
:iconbethany-sensei:
Very vivid. You've conveyed the emotion you wanted to describe quite well. About halfway through, I had a strong mental image of magnetic poetry pieces... ^^;

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Stop that, or I shall be forced to foreshorten you.

:) I see Tylweth Teg. :)
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Thank-you very much :aww: I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'magnetic poetry', though ^^;

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I think I suffer from chronic indecisiveness, but I'm not sure.

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We are the sanninja!
I am the manga ninja! *chucks books at you*

I has a photography account ---> [link]
:iconbethany-sensei:
Um... little magnets with individual words on them?

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Stop that, or I shall be forced to foreshorten you.

:) I see Tylweth Teg. :)

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